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Monday, 31 August 2015

My speech!

Here is a video of me saying my speech! WHY WE SHOULD HAVE LOCKERS! Wow! what a day! I just read my speech out to the whole class! but I didn't get to any of the finals but I am still happy! because a lot of people gave me positive feedback and they really liked my speech!. I'm also very proud of myself because I tried my best!. When it came to the school speech finalist everyone was so excited because they were cheering for there friends. In our class Ivorn , Faiupu and Hermione made it to the finals! and Maasouama made it to but she is in room 15. But they did really well! and i think they did really great! and everyone who participated in the school finalist were really good! they each had a good pace and they had a original topic like  they didn't do the same speech topic. But i wish everyone could be in the speech finalist but we could only have 4 people so yeah and most of them got to the finals! and I hope one of them wins!.
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  1. Anonymous7 September 2015 at 10:15

    Aloha Arohi,
    Well done doing your speech I know it was a hard time for you but you did great. I agree with you we should have lockers. Great job,Arohi I have something for you to check. First please make sure that you put a capital letter when it is after a "!" and make sure that you and you don't start with a and,and check your little "I" and maybe you could use less shouting marks. But by the way you did a great job. Make sure you check this before you post this up.

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  2. Anonymous7 September 2015 at 10:49

    Wow!! KIA Ora Arohi .I absolutely LOVE your speech topic also listening to it and finding out some SHOCKING INFO.

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  3. Anonymous16 October 2015 at 10:09

    Thanks Dinah and Ivorn for the wonderful feedback

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