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Wednesday, 1 July 2015

A letter to Snow White

It’s cherry blossom your sister remember? and I was just writing to say that I read your book Snow white and the Dwarves that book has over 8 million hits online! and I have some feedback on your book so first... WHY DID YOU GO INTO A STRANGER'S HOUSE? YOU KNOW BETTER. I'm sure mum told you about stranger danger! i think you need some fresh lessons. She told all of us and I can’t believe that you disobeyed grumpy just because he’s in a bad mood all the time doesn't mean you should disobey him! and why would you listen to that old goldfish she looked like a witch! she had warts , pale skin and that gross apple :P and that prince ewww i don't like the look of him AND he’s a stranger to! and he just kissed you! and people say it’s love and first sight?. No way! plus you don't just marry a prince when you don't even know his name or his personality remember that movie frozen that we watched and that guy prince Hans and Anna thought that they were meant to be but they only knew each other for 6 hours and 3 days then he betrayed her because all he really wanted was Anna’s castle. I think i need to tell you the story again. But then Elsa Anna’s oldest sister froze arendelle the village that they live in then prince Hans tried to kill Elsa so that summer could come back but then Anna saved Elsa do we have to go see that movie again? so yeah anyways i loved the way you tried your best to act and i thought you were great at some of the parts like when you helped the dwarves with the washing and the cooking and you should come visit just you and maybe the prince and if he does come then he can go with leaf green our brother and me and you can have some girly time if you know what I mean go shopping do our nails and go to the pools and yeah so that's me bye! love you to the moon and back maybe ill come and visit you but I really have to go now bye! ;) :) Love cherry blossom. This is a letter to Snow White we had to pretend to be someone and tell snow white what she did wrong and what she did good in her book Snow White and the seven dwarves i was acting as Snow Whites sister Cherry Blossom.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Arohi
    It me Alisis remember me from open day
    I like your work that you did for snow white
    I like how you used punctuation in your writing
    Keep it up and I cant wait to see more of your writing
    Where did you get all this explanation from?

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